Rhinestone Flip Flops
This book had a great deal of potential, but the author’s decision to concentrate on the small details instead of focusing on the bigger picture left me disappointed. The story takes place over an approximate period of four weeks. Nearly every morning, the author tells us Josie empties her bladder and then drinks juice. Each day we are told Brett makes coffee before he leaves for work. Whenever they are in a vehicle, we are told every song that plays on the radio. When they go out for breakfast, they always go to the same place. I sometimes wondered if I was reading the same chapter over and over. The author tries so hard to make the characters seem flawless that they actually come off as quite boring. I kept hoping for some big secret about Brett’s past to be revealed to explain why such a great guy was still single. Perhaps some sort of disagreement between Josie and Brett could have enhanced the plot. Instead each one constantly goes out of his or her way to accommodate the other. They do not even seem to think for themselves. When they are told the secret of a successful long-term relationship from a couple who has been together for twelve years, Josie and Brett opt to follow it simply because it worked for someone else. The target audience for “Rhinestone Flip Flops” by Ari Dean is definitely adult females. The story can provide an escape from reality for a reader who is dreaming of meeting the perfect man. |